My Fantasy Creature

As I hopped out of my spaceship landing on the rock-solid planet I said to myself. “This is just another deserted planet.” Suddenly I see the rocks shaking and rattling then I hear thumping. It gets louder and louder, my heart beats faster. Suddenly a Bird-snake-frog like creature appeared from the top of the hill, it screeches.I take a few steps back heading for my spaceship and it hops closer. I turn my back just for a few seconds . I turn back around and it’s gone, just vanished into the darkness of the night. I think really carefully “What was that- that thing?”“I better get out of here before it comes back.” I clambered into my spaceship shaking with fear thinking about the creature. Then I thought maybe it didn’t want to hurt me, maybe, just maybe it was hurt or lost.I blast off to another planet in my spaceship. The same things happen again as if time is repeating its self.  The rocks rattle and the creature appears from the top of the hill.This time I moved closer and closer. I got a glimpse of its 5 eyes poking out from the top of its head.  Sparkles appear from its head.I suddenly feel calm as if it’s not going to hurt me. I feel as if it’s my friend. I take it back to my spaceship, but it’s too afraid to go inside.I try talking to it. “What’s your name?” I asked it.It said “Quinchston.” “Where are you from?” I replied. “From an unknown planet in the forbidden zone.”“Wait here I will get you some thing to eat.” I climbed into my spaceship. I return with a plate of fruit in my hands.I look for it. It seems to have disappeared. I see sparkles like I saw around its head. I sway my hands around the sparkles.I feel something, it’s still here.“There is no need to be afraid I won’t hurt you.” I say. It appears again and says “I’m not afraid it is just that my master passed by and I wish for him not to see me.”           “Your master? But there was no-one.” I Replied. “He is invisible and told me never to come around people like you.” 

It says. “I must go, do not come looking for me.” It disappears and I never thought of it again. I only thought about its master.  The thought of his master and how he is invisible wonders me till this day.

How did he become invisible? Was he already invisible? Can he make him self be visible?

Has anyone seen him? These questions keep me thinking Through-out the days of my life.



3 Responses to “My Fantasy Creature”

  1.   Momtahina Says:

    I really liked the way that you used a lot of description!

    Do you wish that Quinchston stayed with you ?

    Well, I am done with my Fantsy Creature.
    Would you comment on my blog!?

  2.   Holly Says:

    This writing was really neat it had lots of description in it which was great

    I have read quite alot of your writing and it has all been awesome. They all made me feel like I was there

  3.   sokeina Says:

    Hi Momtahina and Holly,
    Thanks for the comment and i want to say thanks for saying that its really descritive and i think that if you imagine that your actually there in outer space with Quinchston you would see how i felt. Momtahina yes i do wish that Quinchston was back with me.
    Toooooooooooooooooooooooodles :lol: ;) :)

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